I think this looks really cool and you did a great job of creating the pose and having a sense of layers in your picture, all I might add though is to make the head of Jack slightly bigger and make his torso slightly less skinny to add a greater sense of body proportion.
Great picture nonetheless! I hope this helped.
Oh thank you. I'm practicing anatomy while I should've look at my references folder.
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